To put this simply, the design itself isn't good.

The bloke has tried, yet it's not about the attempt it's about how people will see it. It's obviously not elegant enough to put onto a t-shirt. The reason why you guys think illustrated's given bad feedback, in fact he's had the courtesy of telling you the truth.

Now back to subject, try something different, the font in the centre doesn't look appealing nor does it represent anything to me. The circle/centred oval to be thickened and remove the pattern and change the gradient to a monotone perhaps a little darkened with a inner shadow 90o 40% distance 3.

Keep trying man, you'll only get better.

I'm a noob... this is my first logo...

I will keep trying.

20202020

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MrMcDolphin wrote

Illustrated wrote Neither look good.
idk why you;re doing this.

Get rid of all your layer styles on that.
Then add color overlay, and make it a dark-ish gray...

Thats it.
Thats all you need to do.

Don't dis this guy for trying man.

What the hell, are you serious right now?
Do you not know what criticism is? Holy hell what has this section come to?

I told him how he can take it from looking horrible, to looking semi decent based on the design he already has structured.
All he needs to do is make minor changes to the settings, and t will look way better, cleaner, and more professional.

That's not dissing, that's helping.
And then he can learn and expand.
Which he WON'T do if everyone here is just like "10/10 man looks great" which is an absolute lie.

I wasn't lying, I like the 2nd one, like he said "which ones better"
So, I told him.

Nobody ever said "10/10"

Nobody said it was the best.
But there was also no reason to go into that deep of a bitchy mode.

So literal? It's an example of the general comments of anything in this section.
And my god do you even understand? There is no bitch mode about it.
It wasn't even said in a harsh tone.
If you read that in an offensive way, you need to learn how to chill.

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MrMcDolphin wrote

Illustrated wrote Neither look good.
idk why you;re doing this.

Get rid of all your layer styles on that.
Then add color overlay, and make it a dark-ish gray...

Thats it.
Thats all you need to do.

Don't dis this guy for trying man.

What the hell, are you serious right now?
Do you not know what criticism is? Holy hell what has this section come to?

I told him how he can take it from looking horrible, to looking semi decent based on the design he already has structured.
All he needs to do is make minor changes to the settings, and t will look way better, cleaner, and more professional.

That's not dissing, that's helping.
And then he can learn and expand.
Which he WON'T do if everyone here is just like "10/10 man looks great" which is an absolute lie.

Constructive criticism is fine, however it is the way you post it in which makes it comes across very condescending. There's no need for the ellipsis nor the 'idk why you're doing this'.

"idk why you're doing this" as in the effects all over it that make it looks bad.
I literally, in fact, do not know, why he is doing that, when it would look 100x better if he did what I suggested.

Illustrated wrote Neither look good.
idk why you;re doing this.

Get rid of all your layer styles on that.
Then add color overlay, and make it a dark-ish gray...

Thats it.
Thats all you need to do.

LOW7HER wrote

Illustrated wrote Neither look good.
idk why you;re doing this.

Get rid of all your layer styles on that.
Then add color overlay, and make it a dark-ish gray...

Thats it.
Thats all you need to do.

why are people on the tech game so judgmental may i ask at least hes trying

Are you serious?
Don't post on a graphics forum if you don't want feedback.
Because people that are passionate about it will tel you exactly what you need to hear.
If you can't handle criticism don't post.

The logo itself is a very outdated style, I think you improved it alot when taking off the strong drop shadow and the pattern. But yeah, like Illustrated says, don't post if you can't take criticism, I used to get mad when people were telling me I did overused styles, but I learnt that I would try to find a own style, or atleast something that's not that outdated.
A simple improvement to this logo would be removing the ring, it will probably make it look better.

Illustrated wrote

MrMcDolphin wrote

Illustrated wrote Neither look good.
idk why you;re doing this.

Get rid of all your layer styles on that.
Then add color overlay, and make it a dark-ish gray...

Thats it.
Thats all you need to do.

Don't dis this guy for trying man.

What the hell, are you serious right now?
Do you not know what criticism is? Holy hell what has this section come to?

I told him how he can take it from looking horrible, to looking semi decent based on the design he already has structured.
All he needs to do is make minor changes to the settings, and t will look way better, cleaner, and more professional.

That's not dissing, that's helping.
And then he can learn and expand.
Which he WON'T do if everyone here is just like "10/10 man looks great" which is an absolute lie.

You wouldn't be drove if someone str8 commented

Idk why your doing this.

If I got told that I wouldn't even try that's just fcked up. That's dissing the man making it seem like he shouldn't do it.

MrMcDolphin wrote

Illustrated wrote

MrMcDolphin wrote

Illustrated wrote Neither look good.
idk why you;re doing this.

Get rid of all your layer styles on that.
Then add color overlay, and make it a dark-ish gray...

Thats it.
Thats all you need to do.

Don't dis this guy for trying man.

What the hell, are you serious right now?
Do you not know what criticism is? Holy hell what has this section come to?

I told him how he can take it from looking horrible, to looking semi decent based on the design he already has structured.
All he needs to do is make minor changes to the settings, and t will look way better, cleaner, and more professional.

That's not dissing, that's helping.
And then he can learn and expand.
Which he WON'T do if everyone here is just like "10/10 man looks great" which is an absolute lie.

You wouldn't be drove if someone str8 commented

Idk why your doing this.

If I got told that I wouldn't even try that's just fcked up. That's dissing the man making it seem like he shouldn't do it.

straight drove? What's that even mean lmao.
And you clearly didn't read all of what I said so I'm not even going to bother.