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TehoneDesign
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Hi guys I thought I would go out my comfort zone and do some drawing/Illustarting never been that keen on it took me a while to do but thought I like would get some feedback from the pro's of TTG. Be kind

I did the ideal sketch on Illustrator and the final colouring in Photoshop.
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I really want to get better at this tips please!
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Its looks alright although there is quite a bit that could be changed..

Some big ones are:
1) When your doing an outline you want to make most of the lines the same size,
its a lot easier to colour and makes it look lot cleaner.
2) The hair colour is alright but you have the wrong skin colour, there are a lot of tutorials to help out with this,
just have a look on YouTube and you should find some straight away.
3) It looks like your kinda basing it off Kaneki, Ken from Tokyo Ghoul
If you are, I would suggest changing the mask to black or a dark grey and instead of having which looks to be a red shadow, use a light black shadow
and have either black or just a white eye with a red iris.

Even just using this should help!
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dude, when you do work, and its yours IM HAPPY its always good (some peoples work is trash im not going to lie).

But this is nice, i like it personaly
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TehoneDesign
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HazZaIsMe wrote
Its looks alright although there is quite a bit that could be changed..

Some big ones are:
1) When your doing an outline you want to make most of the lines the same size,
its a lot easier to colour and makes it look lot cleaner.
2) The hair colour is alright but you have the wrong skin colour, there are a lot of tutorials to help out with this,
just have a look on YouTube and you should find some straight away.
3) It looks like your kinda basing it off Kaneki, Ken from Tokyo Ghoul
If you are, I would suggest changing the mask to black or a dark grey and instead of having which looks to be a red shadow, use a light black shadow
and have either black or just a white eye with a red iris.

Even just using this should help!
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ApexJnr wrote dude, when you do work, and its yours IM HAPPY its always good (some peoples work is trash im not going to lie).

But this is nice, i like it personaly


sRVisualsGFX wrote That's very good! More skilled than a lot of the designers on here

even me




Thank you guys means a lot just want to get better at this I have the interest for it and want to be a pro one day
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