I feel that two that are off to the sides are inappropriate it would look better without them. Also maybe do a little more blending with the text it looks out of place. After all of that you will be on the right track

It looks like it's made in C4D completely, am I right?
I think you should do a plain 3D render in Cinema 4D, then adding the material in PSD, because it looks so much better.
I'll show you a example,
unfortunately I did not have the same text render saved, but it looked pretty much like this one, but without the bend and of course, some other letters.

This is how it looked when I rendered it from Cinema 4D:

This is how it looked after I added some layerstyles and some effects to it in PS:

I really dont like the style. If i was to do something like this id make it a clean 3d with just one logo and have a mask on the front of the logo not around on the sides etc. (If you include to much of the same logo the rating of the work may slowly be worse as it just seems like you have put no work into the actual logo and just completely focused on adding different things.) Next time try and focus carefully on one logo maybe trying to be original like something you havent seen before But i guess ill give you a 5/10 for trying

Seinfeld wrote It looks like it's made in C4D completely, am I right?
I think you should do a plain 3D render in Cinema 4D, then adding the material in PSD, because it looks so much better.
I'll show you a example,
unfortunately I did not have the same text render saved, but it looked pretty much like this one, but without the bend and of course, some other letters.

This is how it looked when I rendered it from Cinema 4D:

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This is how it looked after I added some layerstyles and some effects to it in PS:

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Very false, materials in cinema 4d can look a lot more realistic if you have enough knowledge and decent lighting and render settings.

OP I honestly don't like the logo concept, nor the final render of the logo.

Okay whatever mate, but does it look like he have enough knowledge to do that? This material is just taken from some GFX pack he downloaded on YouTube.

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Seinfeld wrote It looks like it's made in C4D completely, am I right?
I think you should do a plain 3D render in Cinema 4D, then adding the material in PSD, because it looks so much better.
I'll show you a example,
unfortunately I did not have the same text render saved, but it looked pretty much like this one, but without the bend and of course, some other letters.

This is how it looked when I rendered it from Cinema 4D:

Click to View Content

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This is how it looked after I added some layerstyles and some effects to it in PS:

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Very false, materials in cinema 4d can look a lot more realistic if you have enough knowledge and decent lighting and render settings.

OP I honestly don't like the logo concept, nor the final render of the logo.

Okay whatever mate, but does it look like he have enough knowledge to do that? This material is just taken from some GFX pack he downloaded on YouTube.

+1 but still a YouTube graphics pack usually has decent textures, OP obviously made a bad choice.