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I made this for the girl I like. I put lots of time and effort into it, and I'm just wanting opinions, ratings, and it critiqued. I know that the lines could be cleaner and stuff like that, but I went for the look I gave it. I redrew the eye, hair, and eyebrow from a picture she gave me. It looks quite exact. I did a copy in Photoshop first, and then moved it to Illustrator.

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Looks good, but I don't think peoples eyebrows are that big they link onto the hair?
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Vexaah wrote Looks good, but I don't think peoples eyebrows are that big they link onto the hair?

Yeah, I kind of did exaggerate a bit on the eyebrow to hair ratio, but her eye brows are pretty long. I'm putting the original picture.

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Some huge eyebrows you got there, but nice work ;)
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Kazu wrote
Vexaah wrote Looks good, but I don't think peoples eyebrows are that big they link onto the hair?

Yeah, I kind of did exaggerate a bit on the eyebrow to hair ratio, but her eye brows are pretty long. I'm putting the original picture.

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Yeah, maybe shorten them on your work a little?
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Musk wrote Some huge eyebrows you got there, but nice work ;)
Thank you very much. Your comment means a lot. I know I overdid the eyebrows. I can never look at them the same.
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Vexaah wrote
Kazu wrote
Vexaah wrote Looks good, but I don't think peoples eyebrows are that big they link onto the hair?

Yeah, I kind of did exaggerate a bit on the eyebrow to hair ratio, but her eye brows are pretty long. I'm putting the original picture.

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Yeah, maybe shorten them on your work a little?
I will probably do so. Thank you very much for your feedback.
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this looks awesome and at least you could say you made it
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this looks awesome and at least you could say you made it
Thank you for the feedback. Yeah I can do that haha.
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The eyebrows are not aligned like the picture, however, good job!
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