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Hey Guys! Today I did my first shoe advertisement! It's an ad for the Nike Mambacurial shoe. Inspired by Partial, I decided to give it a shot. Let me know what you think! Thanks and have a great day!
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Any opinions or feedback is greatly appreciated!
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The shoe seems to stick out a little too much for my taste. That being said, ads don't catch the eyes of everyone! I think it looks great though man. Keep up the good work!

7/10 (Shoe seems too bright for the rest of the picture)
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I agree I was changing the shor opacity a bit but I decided to leave it higher to have a main focal point in the picture. Since it is the only source of color in the picture, I wanted the colors to be a bit more vibrant. Thanks for that feedback man I appreciate it
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If people want to know what the shoe is
you're telling me I have to read all those scrambled letters?

I want to buy a shoe
without having to crack the da vinci code.
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I would say get rid of the white box at the top of the shoe or make it less visible and move the NIKE letters a bit closer together, apart from that I really like it
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I'm not a fan of the words being scrambled around but I like everything else. 8.5/10
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Mambacurial was very hard for me to read/figure out. If you wouldn't of said it in the OT I'd of thought those were random letters and curial be the name.
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Tiffxny wrote Mambacurial was very hard for me to read/figure out. If you wouldn't of said it in the OT I'd of thought those were random letters and curial be the name.

That is what I was saying
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As for the actual design part, I thought it was creative. Looking back at it I definitely would have added the shoes name under the part where it says "Nike Footwear". Thanks for the feedback! Lets me know what I need to work on.
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