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C4D - Please Give Critisism
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This Is Just Something That I Made Over The Last Few Hours Out Of Boredom. Please Let Me Know What You Think For I Am Not A Pro At This Nor Am I Experienced With Making Things Like This.

So I Started With A Single Logo Then Multiplied It Using Reflective Surfaces In C4D And By Doing That I Got This...

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Next I Kinda Got Carried Away And Just Played Around With Different Fonts And Decided On One But I Forgot To Take Pictures For A Bit And Eventually Decided To Put The Previous Picture On A 3D Block And Using Thrausi I "Chopped" It Into About 150 Pieces Then Added Some Colors And Got This... Also The Ceiling And Floor Are Blurred Reflective Surfaces.

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Eventually, After Adding Lights And Playing Around With Colors And Placement Of Different Things I Got The Final Product Which Is This.

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Please Leave Comments On What You Think Of This & I'm Sorry If You Don't Know What Strange Music Is. Its A Music Label I've Been Following Since Early '06.
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I'm not experienced with C4D, but I think you should change up the colors on either the text or the background (or add a glow to the text) to make it contrast more and to make it stand out more visibly, because it is kind of hard to read the text with similar colors as the background. Looks good, just needs some adjustments .
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I just don't understand the design. I get the concept but you need to change the text, add red spikes or whatever those are called on/behind the text and make it 3D, make it way more cleaner instead of those images crammed together
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I don't even understand what this is, what is it for? Is it a desktop background? Poster?
Anyways, I don't think it looks good, I don't think you should do complete designs in Cinema 4D, because it's extremely hard to do, it's easier in PS. Render it as an PNG and tick off Alpha Channel, and you'll have your renders.
It's alot easier in PS, it takes less time and most of the times, looks better.
e.g the blur is easier and will look better in PS.

Also
Isn't It Hard To Type Like This Every Time You Type A Word?
I Mean It Must Be A Pain Spamming Shift Every Time You Type A New Word.
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