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Opinion On This Rap I'm Writing
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It is still a work in progress but if you could just read it and rate it out of 1-10 and leave a bit of constructive criticism that'd be great.
I realize I can't leave it to late
'Cause every step I take could be the last one I make
I was young when I lost my mum I never got to say and thank for all she'd done.
When my Dad left it was so sudden it left me thinkin' what has just happened but maybe it was for the best.
'Cause every step I take could be the last one I make
I was young when I lost my mum I never got to say and thank for all she'd done.
When my Dad left it was so sudden it left me thinkin' what has just happened but maybe it was for the best.
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