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I completed my first short film for College!
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So I started a Media course at the begining of September and I conducted my first 'test' short film. The reason for this was for the tutors to assess the editing skills I may already have.

I thought I would share it with you guys here on TTG and see what you all think of my work!

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I actually really like this, the editing seems pretty slick , the plot is good and really just everything seems pretty fine
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Editing skills, great. Camera skills okay. The story was good too, enjoyed it
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I like this alot and think you did a great job with it!

In the beginning of the film the camera was a bit shaky while recording the flowers
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no offence but what editing?

bored after 20 seconds, music was bit irrelevant to the plot,

may seem harsh but your asking for opinions, mediocre
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WHELAN21 wrote no offence but what editing?

bored after 20 seconds, music was bit irrelevant to the plot,

may seem harsh but your asking for opinions, mediocre


i am pretty new to working on any editing software. we were told to produce a storyboard (which i did) and we filmed and and created that short film. thanks for the feedback though man
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Not bad for a start. I switching majors to Communication next fall and I plan on start producing some shirt clips soon.
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Got to love an old stagecoach. #UK.
Nice video mate.
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This is a pretty cool story and a good short film, would be cool if there was like some sort of talking and stuff in it.
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Skrubble wrote Got to love an old stagecoach. #UK.
Nice video mate.


Got to hate Stagecoach. So unreliable in my area, always breaking down and never on time. Then again whenever is public transport in the UK man! Thanks for the feedback.

ZTG wrote This is a pretty cool story and a good short film, would be cool if there was like some sort of talking and stuff in it.


We tried to refrain from using dialogue simply because we wanted the story to be understandable without any in it. Thanks for the positive feedback though man
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