Nice video mate that's pretty cool for a start and I hope you get better once you learn more ;)

SDP wrote

WHELAN21 wrote no offence but what editing?

bored after 20 seconds, music was bit irrelevant to the plot,

may seem harsh but your asking for opinions, mediocre

i am pretty new to working on any editing software. we were told to produce a storyboard (which i did) and we filmed and and created that short film. thanks for the feedback though man

that's fair enough after reading back I was pretty harsh lol,
thing with short films is majority of them are bare and slow, which is seen so much and
can be terribly and boring i would suggest packing it from the beggining with action, movements or sound that jumps out to get people's attention, its a short film so you want it to be faster pace.

I think people miss that sound is proberly more important in making good video's adding effects and other things can really bring it to life and make it a skilled piece

Wow man, I loved it! Good idea, on getting the lottery ticket, then making 20, Idk just a great idea over all! Good job!