Hi! I just wanted to post this here to help build my channel and more importantly get some constructive criticism on how i can improve my commentating to be more engaging to the audience as well as editing tips as i'm not perfect at either and no matter who you are, there is always room for improvement! Thank you for your time and I hope I get some constructive criticism as to how i can improve my channel and myself ALSO When I say stuff that may seem ignorant, it's solely kidding around i'm not really serious throughout the video!

Thanks for taking the time to look at my video,
Stoffie





If you don't enjoy it but don't have any constructive criticism please don't be too rude, I'm trying to improve and I know I have a lot of work to do!