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CuIt
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Hello everyone, I just finished this piece and wanted to
share it here. I know the image of the girl is very low res,
but I couldn't find a different one that I liked.
Anyways thanks and as always feedback is appreciated.

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Okay, I tried fixing the image of the girl, it's not huge difference
but I do think it looks slightly better (its a really low res image sorry). Also I took the advice
and changed how the stickers were positioned. Thanks
and of course give me more feedback if you'd like!

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Really love the concept idea on this piece!

Must have been really fun to work with.

Only thing throwing me off is how linear the stickers are.

Spread them out our voices don't travel in a straight line.

Post the results if you get the chance!
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Looks clean and all but the girl doesn't pop out as much as she should.

She is too blurred and "in the background". Try it without the blur. It might just be a low res picture but...

-Framework
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Framework wrote Looks clean and all but the girl doesn't pop out as much as she should.

She is too blurred and "in the background". Try it without the blur. It might just be a low res picture but...

-Framework

Took your advice check out the
updated version and thanks for the feedback
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Framework wrote Looks clean and all but the girl doesn't pop out as much as she should.

She is too blurred and "in the background". Try it without the blur. It might just be a low res picture but...

-Framework

Sorry man I tried to fix it as best I could
but the image is just really low res, for the future
I'll make sure to use better base images
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What font did you use for the word "Shout"?
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Goosie wrote
Really love the concept idea on this piece!

Must have been really fun to work with.

Only thing throwing me off is how linear the stickers are.

Spread them out our voices don't travel in a straight line.

Post the results if you get the chance!


Agreed, love the concept. Just executed badly:/

The woman seems to be a little to blurred/pix-elated.
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