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JHendrix
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Recently started reading/watching the Great Gatsby and fell in love. Would like some feedback on my first wallpaper. Literally got photoshop today and started playing around, lemme know what you guys think.

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Also, anyone with some experience with Photoshop or any other program and has some free time to make an amazing Gatsby wallpaper please PM me as I would love to see what you could do.

Thanks!
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Well, since it was your first time using Photoshop, this isn't awful.

But, there is a lot wrong with it for your next go around:
The background is stretched
The render in the middle is simple with a yellow outline around it (boring)
The quote from the movie is wrong. "A little party never killed nobody."

Again, not bad for your first time so it is hard to criticize you since you hadn't used the program before, but take into consideration what I said for next time and I am sure you will produce something much better!
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Well, since it was your first time using Photoshop, this isn't terrible but can use a little work
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Remaag wrote Well, since it was your first time using Photoshop, this isn't terrible but can use a little work


Have any suggestions on what to change,add, or remove?
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AR15 wrote Well, since it was your first time using Photoshop, this isn't awful.

But, there is a lot wrong with it for your next go around:
The background is stretched
The render in the middle is simple with a yellow outline around it (boring)
The quote from the movie is wrong. "A little party never killed nobody."

Again, not bad for your first time so it is hard to criticize you since you hadn't used the program before, but take into consideration what I said for next time and I am sure you will produce something much better!


Actually had the quote correct in the first rendering but after changes to text and already saving to a JPEG I realized it was wrong and it was to late to change it haha. Luckily it isnt to far off, will change in future attempts. Thanks for feedback!
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