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It's not particularly my style but i like the way you drew it, you did choose some good and some bad color choices (In my option), i also like the way you made it stand out, to me it feels like some one is going through a hard time and there wondering ("Why, Me ?!?!?), but that's me, in all its a nice well drawn cartoon and i have to give it a 8/10, Nice work keep it up !
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It would be kinda cool if it was made well, but it wasn't.

Looks very lazy to me. Like of pixelated areas and sharp edges in there.
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I like the style of what you're going for, it looks very amateurish and thrown together, it breaks up the seriousness of the drawing.

The only thing I would say is that if you were going to go for a style like that I would at least keep my line work smooth, you have points in here which are smooth and other points which are very sharp or pixelated. Either do sooth lines or don't do them at all because it really draws your attention away.

Take the 'H' on 'WHY' for example, the other 2 letters are moderately good but that 'H' seems poorly done in comparison.

Work on the lines a little and I think it would be a nice little piece of work.
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