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Here's the revamp I did for my friend. Recently, I am getting back into designing so could I get some opinions?

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Adelida wrote That actually looks really really good! Great job on it. 8.5/10. I don't really have anything bad to say about it.


Thanks!

If it is not too much to ask, what should I have changed to get that 10/10 haha ;)
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Amazing 2D work. i like how you have kept it Clean & simple.

9/10
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Rui wrote Amazing 2D work. i like how you have kept it Clean & simple.

9/10



Thanks man, I really appreciate it!
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Flops wrote
Rui wrote Amazing 2D work. i like how you have kept it Clean & simple.

9/10



Thanks man, I really appreciate it!


It would of been a 10/10, all i needs is just a little more colour, maybe incorporate the yellow/orange in to the design a bit more than just the diamonds.
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Rui wrote
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Rui wrote Amazing 2D work. i like how you have kept it Clean & simple.

9/10



Thanks man, I really appreciate it!


It would of been a 10/10, all i needs is just a little more colour, maybe incorporate the yellow/orange in to the design a bit more than just the diamonds.


Yeah, when I was creating this I tried putting and orange hue on the rectangles next to Dumpy. I did one at a time, but they didn't come out so great so I just scrapped it. Perhaps orange "Lighting" would have done the trick... hmmm.

Thanks for the feedback!
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Flops wrote
Rui wrote
Flops wrote
Rui wrote Amazing 2D work. i like how you have kept it Clean & simple.

9/10



Thanks man, I really appreciate it!


It would of been a 10/10, all i needs is just a little more colour, maybe incorporate the yellow/orange in to the design a bit more than just the diamonds.


Yeah, when I was creating this I tried putting and orange hue on the rectangles next to Dumpy. I did one at a time, but they didn't come out so great so I just scrapped it. Perhaps orange "Lighting" would have done the trick... hmmm.

Thanks for the feedback!


I would suggest, trying the colour on Majestic to make it stand out.
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It's pretty good!

8/10!
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Looks really really good, I feel like as a banner it looks very one dimensional and doesn't look as though there's any layers to the image. maybe get some rubble or smoke stocks and mildly place them around the place over the soldier stock or something just to add some depth to the image and add a stronger gradient map? Really good though
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this is really dope, could you make me a banner & avatar?
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