Well to start with, the clip is very, how should I put it.. Fuzzy. Like you rendered it wrong or something even though its in 1080p. Adding a color correction might help this. Your syncing is pretty good for the most part but still needs work. And add a little pizazz to it, every editor has there own style so make sure and show your style when making an edit. Overall it was bland and dull other then the synced audio witch was nice and a big part of editing. Heres a couple of my edits for reference. Youll notice that I have a very unique style of editing and ill hope you take this to heart. Good luck friend!

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Yeah the only reason it was fuzzy because the clip was uploaded through theatre back on blacl ops 2 and downloaded from youtube so the quality defo lacked!

Thankyou for the advice ill take that onboard and try and improve and actually learn some nice tricks

much appreciated,
Zephir