Not too bad, nice to see something different keep at it

I thought it was decent homie! It's a good in my book

I think the whole sniper editing, slow to fast and repeat bit is old. BUT, if you like it..That's all that matters. A lot of people still like these videos, so my word won't stand out much.

Now, onto the actual editing, which you asked about! The beginning was really needed. I only say that, because videos like these people that do enjoy them don't care for you running unless it specifically leads into your shot(I.E Jumping off a roof and spinning to shoot VS, Running in slowmo for a few seconds, crouching for a few seconds then shooting.) The complete blur on the camera, following the beat, wasn't to necessary either. Overall, for me, about 4/10.

Again, this is my opinion. And there will be people out there who love it and hate it. Keep up, and you'll get better. Lord knows > I couldn't even edit that if I tried right now. So you're already beating me

IMO it was ehh.. But keep it up man.. You'll get better as time goes on!