It was actually pretty good for your first one.

Tips:

-Avoid saying "uhm" so much
-Center yourself more Infront of the camera
-The clicking of your joysticks got annoying after a couple minutes. Find a way to make them not as loud
-relax some. It seemed like you were up tight and kinda stressed out

I hope this could help. Pm me if you need anymore critique

I thought this the video was pretty good! Although it might just be my sound you could move a little closer to the the mic and center the camera but besides that you could do really good! Can't wait to see Infinite Warfare Beta Videos!

Congrats on your first upload man! I think for your first shot it's really good.

You should try adding an intro to your future videos and get some branding for homepage as well (Cover, logo etc.) because this will give the appearance of professionalism / there are thousands of people out there trying to get noticed especially when it comes to gaming so you gotta make sure your shit stands out.

You should also try and make interesting and captivating thumbnails for your videos to try and draw people to click on your video instead of the others all around it.

People who sub to your channel do it because they like what you've put out. So you should try and be consistent with your uploads and set them to a theme. A good way of doing this is to create playlists which focus on specific things for example best frags or funny moments. This acts like a series and your viewers will keep coming back to see the next episode especially if they know there's a new one each week.

Finally, when you start to get a following / if things are working out you should drop some dosh on a nice Mic and Cam. This is something I really need to do but at 27 subs I can't justify the investment just yet so I invest more time in editing my content to make up for the average cam and audio.

Ultimately if you love creating content and aren't just trying to make a buck then just keep doing what you do man and someone will notice eventually!

Peace

Thank you guys I have posted my new videos. Trying to improve a little bit.