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LicketyxxSplit
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Thoughts on this one?

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So dope man only thing I would've done different is removed the trees in the back on the right side cuz they're dull compared to the rest. Other than that, very nice!
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201 wrote So dope man only thing I would've done different is removed the trees in the back on the right side cuz they're dull compared to the rest. Other than that, very nice!


Thank you! And I see where you are coming from on the dull spots, but I think I actually like that. Gives it some depth I feel. And thanks for the feedback!
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The way the snake fades off into the tress could use some work.
It's a cool idea with what you got here, maybe working on it more and it can look 10x better.
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Skates wrote The way the snake fades off into the tress could use some work.
It's a cool idea with what you got here, maybe working on it more and it can look 10x better.


Thanks for the input!
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Change the font & remove dead trees imo. Other than that it looks pretty decent. Also maybe no colored drop shadow on the text.. simpler is better
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I dig the snake image with the trees but maybe find a better way to incorporate the text.
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Thanks for the input guys! @sota @Slicc
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