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Seriously, it's crap. Stop before someone gets hurt
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Your lyric skills are ok, but the song just isn't a great one to parody
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It's ok, I wouldn't put it on youtube, but keep practising. Maybe put one in after a few more attempts.
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Pretty good, I'd listen to it if it was on youtube
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Great!
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I wrote an overwatch parody, I'm looking for advice!
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I wrote an overwatch parody, I'm looking for advice!Posted:

iFallOffStuff
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I'd like to say I'm an ok singer, and decent at music in general. And (call me sad if you like : ) ) I just really enjoy song parodies. So I decided to make a parody of my favourite song atm : September Song by JP cooper. As an overwatch parody ( Ok now this really is sounding sad) anyway... I'd appreciate if you tell me what you think on a scale of 1 - 10 / Shit - Amazing.

The song isn't done yet, it still needs some tweaking (thinking of rewriting first 2 sections),but it's the struggle of having someone else play Mercy really badly when you main her too.

Our team is strong dont deny it
All of our team is on fire
Send whoever you like it
You'll just die

Reins shield can never be broken
Anna there's no point in scoping
I don't know what you were hoping
Save your time

We had the payload constantly moving, constantly moving
But reapers ult just went on, all of our team was gone
We moved so slowly, Mei's blaster froze me
Mercy your ult is still on, tell me what is it on
Can't you revive the team, we'd win easily

and IIIIIIIII

I remember the time fall, we were giving it our all
Mercy your ult is still on, tell me what is it on
Can't you revive the team, we'd win easily

Sometimes I think that you play her, just so you can rank up faster
Cause if you cared you'd heal us, not let us die

Sometimes I start raging at her, standing there killing the tracer
As im on critical health, running by.

But, we had the payload on constantly moving, constantly moving
But reapers ult just went on, all of our team was gone
We moved so slowly, Mei's blaster froze me
Mercy your ult is still on, tell me what is it on
Can't you revive the team, we'd win easily


And iiiii

I remember the time fall, we were giving it our all
Mercy your ult is still on, tell me what is it on
Can't you revive the team, we'd win easily

And as the game went by, you just let us diee, let us (die)

But reapers ult just went on, all of our team was gone
We moved so slowly, Mei's blaster froze me
Mercy your ult is still on, tell me what is it on
Can't you revive the team, we'd win easily

And iiii, I remember the time fall, we were giving it our all
Mercy you alt is still on tell me what is it on,
Cant you revive the team, wed win the game with ease
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iFallOffStuff
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The main thing i'm wondering is is it worth putting it on youtube or something like that, or would it just be a public embaressment.
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The post seems to have got a lot of views, but not much feedback. Probably because the lyrics are just too long to read, but the song itself is actually pretty good. You just need to find a way of getting it into audio. If you like, I can try and find time later today to get either me or someone else to sing it for you.
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