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#11. Posted:
anv
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Axios wrote You have some pretty good work here, I must say I am pretty impressed by some of it. However, I do have some criticism to share with you - you need to focus more on the smaller elements in your work. What I mean about focusing on the smaller elements is this, make sure things are proportionate (the very first design, head doesn't match the body). Focus on placement of social media icons, and how you can incorporate that to flow evenly with the design. Focus on shadowing (the BPI banner blew me away, but I definitely feel as though the brick overlay on the logo appears a bit flat on the right side.) Whilst it's up to you what you make with what I mentioned above, please understand that it is not to instigate you or belittle your work, merely to help you excel and meet your goal of becoming a Graphics King. It is definitely worth it, but do not become obsessed with the idea - do this to contribute accordingly to the community, be helpful and courteous to those whom require your help and services. Be sure to post feedback within other threads that support the artist and topic at hand, whilst bearing informative content, essentially extending your own hand of help and support to them as I am for you now. If you ever have any questions about what I mentioned above or anything related to the site or Graphics Design, feel free to Private Message me. Have a good one!


Thank you for your feedback I think this has to be one of the best feedback that I have ever got and no don't worry I know how to take constructive criticism unlike some people and I will take all of your key points in mind when I'm next designing, thank you for your kind words your advice is really great
#12. Posted:
CriticaI
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This is not graphics king quality work.
Even if it was, you gotta have connections with TTG Staff

Work on your lighting. I lot of your 3D text doesn't match the scene.

BTW I'm not trying to be a dick about it, I just telling you from previous experience



I like the lighting on this one though.

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#13. Posted:
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Just focus on perfecting your craft, and hope the meaningless accolades will follow.
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