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SaitamaYT
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This is my One Punch Man themed channel. If someone could give me some constructive criticism for episode 1 and 2, that would be great!

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1. Your intro is far too long, an intro shouldn't be any longer than 10 seconds (your intro is 20 seconds).

2. Put some excitement into your voice when talking, if you're not excited about the video then the viewer won't be either.
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Ok thank u for ur advice. I will try to sound excited although usually I sound bored
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