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I attempted to make like an ad for the mouse I have, and I kinda liked how it turned out so wanted to have your opinions on it and also what I could improve.
This is my first attempt, so there's definitely a lot to improve.

Some info: I started with the picture of the mouse itself (I'll attach it below) and I was also going to make a lot more about the mouse, but it didn't turn out as I wanted it to, so I settled with this.

Anyways, feedback is appreciated and if you like it, a thumbs up on behance would be cool.
Thanks for checking it out


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Looks clean man, I like it
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Looks cool. Don't know how I feel about the mouse wheel though. Just a blank colour that (if i'm not mistaken) is also over parts where the mouse wheel isn't. such as on the far left of the mouse wheel. It looks like it goes over the mouse)
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I personally wouldn't have gone with a gradient at the top, but maybe a black overlay with the opacity low would look good - or even nothing at all.
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Dashii wrote Looks cool. Don't know how I feel about the mouse wheel though. Just a blank colour that (if i'm not mistaken) is also over parts where the mouse wheel isn't. such as on the far left of the mouse wheel. It looks like it goes over the mouse)

I see what you mean, it's a mistake from me when I used the brush. Thanks for noticing
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Axios wrote I personally wouldn't have gone with a gradient at the top, but maybe a black overlay with the opacity low would look good - or even nothing at all.

I appreciate the feedback, I agree with the gradient. Will try something else out the next time! ;)
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