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Hey. I posted on here before about some logo concepts I had made around the letter 'Z'. I took the criticisms about not being able to see the Z and made the Z bolder and the other lines of the box thinner. I also made the whole thing bigger as before it was just some thin lines that didn't look good. I also removed the lines connecting the Z to the box. (You'll see what I mean).

This is the logo I have now:
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Any feedback? This is also the first thing I've made using illustrator rather than photoshop
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if you still hadn't said it was a "Z" logo i'd think it was still more of a box
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I saw the old post and this one and still cannot figure out why you keep trying to put a Z into a box. It just doesn't work out man.

Maybe try making a box, rotate it so two points are pointing up and down, then put a Z inside that is tilted as well?
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I dont know how to explain it but here it goes;

The lines outside of the z are to thin, the design itself is just a a Z, try be more creative towards what you add.

Keep it up bro
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I saw your last post and I have to say you're definitely starting to get a good concept for a logo now. My biggest issue is that the proportions are off. Try to keep every line the same thickness. If you insist on putting the Z in the box I think you have a good start.
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Working the letter Z into a box is really not ideal.

Would recommend you fiddle around with illustrator, if you don't have a copy; there are ways. Mess around with shapes, and small vectors, you can make fairly basic stuff, look pretty good. You also have the flexibility of all of illustrators internals.

The sides are way TOO LONG, and the body of the logo is too thick, it really offsets the balance you need.
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I do not see a Z at all
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Okay, so I got to thinking about this post and here is an idea of what you would be working for with a Z, considering it is not exactly the most "creative" letter there is. This is more of an S imo

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I do like this i believe i have posted on the other thread but i like this one alot!
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Doesn't really look like a Z, but i like the concept and idea of this.

Good work,
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