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Id say 5/10 not because Im being nasty but for you to improve

The main thing I see at fault here is the perspective

another thing is lack of organisation within the objects

Last thing is Colour, Throw some colour in! it really does help

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loonyface wrote Id say 5/10 not because Im being nasty but for you to improve

The main thing I see at fault here is the perspective

another thing is lack of organisation within the objects

Last thing is Colour, Throw some colour in! it really does help



What do you mean by perspective? and it was supposed to be in black & white.
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MaFiA-HeAdShOt wrote
loonyface wrote Id say 5/10 not because Im being nasty but for you to improve

The main thing I see at fault here is the perspective

another thing is lack of organisation within the objects

Last thing is Colour, Throw some colour in! it really does help




What do you mean by perspective? and it was supposed to be in black & white.


Look up perspective, if you dont know about it.

Its very important when it comes to making anything look realistic or artistic
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Did you make that background? If you did - 5/10
If not - 2/10

Keep trying.
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That is pretty good man! 9/10
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Whitesox wrote Did you make that background? If you did - 5/10
If not - 2/10

Keep trying.


Yeah I did. I can do better. I just made it because I was bored.
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Ill give it a 7/10, needs more color
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