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TTGriflesx
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Hey guys this is my first commentary thumbs up comment subscribe
and tell me if i need any improveing
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Thanks,
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bump please comment rate sub!
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Nice game!

Some feedback:

- Write out what you are going to discuss before doing the commentary (don't lose your train of thought).

- Make sure you don't repeat yourself (You said "This is my first commentary" 3 times).

- Try and flesh out your point (MW3/PSN Outage) so that you fully discuss your opinions. It felt a bit rushed or as if you forgot what you were saying.

Other than that great vid! Definitely good for a first commentary!

Note: I appologise if I seem harsh. I'm merely providing constructive criticism to help you improve.

I subbed so I can see the improvements in the next commentary
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yeh thanks man i appreciate it!
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its cool im not into commentaries tho lol could you check out my vids please

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