That_Scene_Kid wrote

Rystar123 wrote

That_Scene_Kid wrote Its not that good. The colors dont lookg ood together, and the blue lines make no sense. The gun looks bad, and you can still see the outline clearly. The fire from the barrel is the best part, and the bollet looks OK, but the "waves" look wierd.

Good to see some criticism

The blue lines were there to break up the black backround, i seriously couldn't think of anything else to put.
I couldn't improve the gun much more without completely destroy the outline.
I also agree with you on the waves, thats a failed attemped at showing the vapour trails from the rotating bullet

lol, I didn't mean to sound like a jaskass. But, The lighting is also important, too. The bullet has a glare on its left side, while the gun has a glare on the top, while firworks are going off over the city to the right.

I see what you mean!

Unfourtunately, photoshop saved the file as a PDF when i specified PSD, and the PDF is corrupted anyway, so all i have is the JPEG, so i can't really edit those things

I Think this laptop needs a fix-up, all the features are slowly failing.

ooh, sexy - Good work 8/10

i Like It Its Differnt To Other Peoples
Very Nice
8/10

Thanks for the positive ratings!

All criticisms welcome too!

i like it, id give it a 8/10

To be honest, I'm surprised your getting ratings about 6.

Cant see anything good about it..

The gun and bullet's lighting are completely different

The background is pretty shocking.

And the swirls make no sense/

haha uhmmm :L looks like paint and gimp mixed... 4/10