That's pretty good and it is a nice short introduction which means you won't lose the viewers attention. Also it looks more professional so that will grab their attention as well. Well done!

I would go straight to python as you have a more options that you can program and ruby is a horrible programming language!

I would recommend making sure you have a dedicated computer to run this server on first that runs with a decent speed and more importantly a good internet upload and download speed as you will be down ...

Hey guys, I'm ZasahGaming, or Lewis.
ZasahGaming is my youtube name (http://www.youtube.com/user/ZasahGaming)
I hope to post on the forum a lot and be very active!