thankz for the feedback dont forget to subscribe.

this my first intro could you tell me feedback to get better and rate and sbscribe thankz. btw i will be text for a cod video. http://www.youtube.com/user/0utSpokenMusic?feature=mhum

cheers for feeback 20 char

this is my first intro can you give feedback on how i can improve and rate,comment and subscibe please. www.youtube.com/0utSpokenMusic

thankz for the feed back i will add music and could you please sub ?

people please help i want o inprove

this is a little intro i just made could you check it out rate and subscribe and comment back on what i can inprove on. i will sub back . thankz .
youtube.com/user/0utSpokenMusic

this is a little intro i just made could you check it out rate and subscribe and comment back on what i can inprove on. i will sub back . thankz .
http://www.youtube.com/user/0utSpokenMusic

i have subbed your channel please sub back.

could you help me get some subs please i am trying to get a youtube partner ship because idid have one with my friend but we had fight so no more partnership because it was originally his account so c ...