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my sister wants to submit this poem but wants some feedback
I lay ponder and wait thinking maybe it was meant to be fate
She's moved on thinking ahead while i've been letting every tear shed
She doesn't love me and never will yet the yearning for her love is all i feel
Maybe she'll be back someday but she'll be my every thought no matter what you say
Because my love for her is never ending yet i know our bond together is descending
As she moves on pushing me out of her head i love her and thats all that must be said
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I lay ponder and wait thinking maybe it was meant to be fate
She's moved on thinking ahead while i've been letting every tear shed
She doesn't love me and never will yet the yearning for her love is all i feel
Maybe she'll be back someday but she'll be my every thought no matter what you say
Because my love for her is never ending yet i know our bond together is descending
As she moves on pushing me out of her head i love her and thats all that must be said
Rate?
Last edited by xlcoleslaw2lx ; edited 3 times in total
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4/10. its alright......
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