10/10 i love it bro keep it up!!!

EdibuhL wrote 10/10 i love it bro keep it up!!!

Thanks, for the feedback, but I'd like some true CnC, anyone?

its nice, but there are some things you should tweak.

i dont like how cartoony the render is. its a cartoon, you shouldnt be editing it too much. While on the topic of the render, the right eye is white>cyan>blue, the left is cyan>blue. choose one and leave it. btw, the cyan>blue looks pretty bad for an eye.

The bg is nice, but the ripples or waves or whatever show and it really ruins the signature.

I dont understand the meaning of the stars, and they dont flow, it would appear as if you just put them there. try making them ALL a shade of yellow close to the bg color.

Behind the render, there is a smudge or something of a blue streak, and you should really take that out.

the text is excellent IMO, but you should take out the lines, and remove the repx or whatever the text is underneath.

overall, not bad, just some things to tweak.

7/10

My overall rating would be...

8/10 Great work!

I'd give it a 7/10.
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Skruffy wrote its nice, but there are some things you should tweak.

i dont like how cartoony the render is. its a cartoon, you shouldnt be editing it too much. While on the topic of the render, the right eye is white>cyan>blue, the left is cyan>blue. choose one and leave it. btw, the cyan>blue looks pretty bad for an eye.

The bg is nice, but the ripples or waves or whatever show and it really ruins the signature.

I dont understand the meaning of the stars, and they dont flow, it would appear as if you just put them there. try making them ALL a shade of yellow close to the bg color.

Behind the render, there is a smudge or something of a blue streak, and you should really take that out.

the text is excellent IMO, but you should take out the lines, and remove the repx or whatever the text is underneath.

overall, not bad, just some things to tweak.

7/10

Thankyou so much, you are the only one on this board who actually gives quality CnC, reprepreprepreprepreprepreprepreprep :trollin:

could be better. it looks a little blurry and on the left side it a bit to bright and were the mario text is you should smudge that with a smoother brush

You need to work with blending. Search smudge tutorials on youtube. suggest using a chalk smudge and putting it on colors color dodge. also take a soft white brush about 400 pixels and pick a place to add lighting. Needs work but not bad.

-RizzoGFX- wrote

Skruffy wrote its nice, but there are some things you should tweak.

i dont like how cartoony the render is. its a cartoon, you shouldnt be editing it too much. While on the topic of the render, the right eye is white>cyan>blue, the left is cyan>blue. choose one and leave it. btw, the cyan>blue looks pretty bad for an eye.

The bg is nice, but the ripples or waves or whatever show and it really ruins the signature.

I dont understand the meaning of the stars, and they dont flow, it would appear as if you just put them there. try making them ALL a shade of yellow close to the bg color.

Behind the render, there is a smudge or something of a blue streak, and you should really take that out.

the text is excellent IMO, but you should take out the lines, and remove the repx or whatever the text is underneath.

overall, not bad, just some things to tweak.

7/10

Thankyou so much, you are the only one on this board who actually gives quality CnC, reprepreprepreprepreprepreprepreprep :trollin:

i mean, if someone has a sig, that isnt animated and doesnt look like garbage, i will point out what i see wrong to help them improve.

but seriously, keep up the work, your really progressing and its starting to show