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The quotations for some reason dont show sorry :'(
This is my english assignment do you think my teacher will approve?
FRIDAY
The world is a large and scary place. So many, Days, Seats, People, There are so many people in it, so many people I will never know, Never knowing, so many things. Now I know. My parents theyve lied to me all this time. My parents enter my room and begin circling me violently as they speak.
You think your whole life is just
FUN FUN FUN FUN
PARTYING PARTYING PARTYING PARTYING
Mum and dad screeched alternating words
Yeah, well it isnt that simple, dammit.
Get in the car. Go. Now! Theres no time to dilly dally. No time for choices. Dad Hollowed
Get in the backseat of the car this very moment or I will tear those hoop earrings out of your precious little ears and feed you the spare cartilage.
Then there will be no more Fun. NO MORE Partying, NO MORE Bowls
No more Cereal and NO MORE...
My parents came to a sudden halt then exited the room? No more? No more what? I thought to myself. What were they taking away from me? What were they hiding from me all these years? What would my friends say? I shouldnt worry I stress to much I mean its FRIDAY I got to get ready for the weekend, WEEKEND!. Harry, Hermione, Dumbledore and Shaniqua screech around the corner towards the bus stop in a convertible, Harry is driving while Shaniqua is riding shotgun, Dumbledore is seated behind Shaniqua and Hermione is in the back next to Dumbledore.
Get in the car Harry sang
But this a bus stop. Youre not a bus.
This is a convertible. You dont even have to open the door. Just get in. Implied Shaniqua
But which seat can I take?
Kicking in the front seat.
Sitting in the back seat. Baby. Harry laughed
They found my notebook all my deepest darkest secrets my, but how? They jumped out of the car it was still running, they all circled around me, Shaniqua stood in front of me holding my Notebook, I was possessed I must speak its contents, I struggled to resist.
Suddenly I began blurting out all the contents.
Another Pleasant Valley Sunday
Study Study Study
Just another Manic Monday
Test Today!
Tuesdays Gone with the Wind!
More homework!
Listen to Wednesdays song!
Music
I am Thursdays child.
You are NOT Thursdays child. Screamed Harry
What comes next? I questioned
The police will be here any minute. Theyre going to see were 12 years old. Theyre going to see the car. Theyre not even going to have to open the doors. Harry Stressed
Its a convertible. yelled Dumbledore
My parents stormed out of the house towards us. The fury in the eyes I knew this wasnt going to end well
Your all under arrest Screamed dad
Goodbye world. Cried Harry
Harry ran towards the car and slid over the hood like the dukes of hazard straight into the drivers seat, smashed the keys in and slammed his foot on the pedal running over Harry, Shaniqua, Dumbledore and Mum and dad. I stood theyre lifeless trying to process something my 12 year old brain couldnt handle, suddenly I look to my left to see a large smiling black man.
How did this happen? said Mr. Black man
He didnt even have his learners permit
I know, I was driven, cruising, fast lanes, switching lanes, I saw it all go down, full speed. Squished. Like Fried Eggs.
Did you say Fried Eggs?
Yes, little girl, I did say Fried Eggs.
Fried Eggs. Fried Eggs. Got to get down on Fried Eggs. I Sang with a smile
Who are you?
I dont know who I am anymore.
Those hoop earrings. That voice.
I have no Voice.
R.B.
Rebecca Black.
The girl who lived.
The girl who lived what did he mean bye lived Im still alive and healthy as ever. At least Im more healthy and alive then these dead people next to me.
The car accident. 11 years ago.
11 years ago? But it feels like it just happened a minute ago.
Well, there was a car accident a minute ago. But there was also one you miraculously survived 11 years ago as a baby. They say that you hit your head. That there was some block in your brain. That theres only one thing you dont have the ability to comprehend. But no one knows what it is. Except your parents. Who are dead now.
Why is this happening to me? Everyone is dead. Its my entire fault. Why couldnt I just choose where to sit? How did they find my notebook? I hate them all
Theyre gone now. Your boy Afro Man is here Hes going to make you a star. I want you to start from the beginning. Tell me what happened.
7am
Yes, thats it
Waking up in the morning. Got to be fresh got togo downstairs.
I knew it.
Everybodys Russian
Tik tok, the time is going on and on.
Cruisin so fast. I want time to fly.
He kept chanting thats its keep on going
Its ItsI dont know what comes next I wasnt sure
FUN! FUN Think about fun... AFRO MAN Screamed
You know what it is! I Sang
He didnt know he really didnt know what it was what was I to do I had to remember these memories I had to, my life would never be the way it used to be until I new I wouldnt give up MR Black man has almost helped my unlock what I thought was forever locked away in my subconscious . What were my parents hiding from me all these years? Who am I!
Youve got to remember something else? Anything? MR Black man panted impatiently
The moon. The moon was so Freaking big. Bigger than my friend. On my right. I wanted to kill that Mutt on my left. I wanted her dead so badly. Her bat mitzvah was so bloody fun. I hated her.
What else, what else?? Keep going!!
We we we so excited. We so excited.
I got this, you got thisnow you know it!
I finally new it I finally retrieved those hidden memories,
If Yesterday it was Thursday, then tomorrow is Saturday, then Sunday comes after wards
Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday, Thursday, Thursday
ITS FRIDAY
Friday. Gotta get down on Friday
Everybodys looking forward to the weekend, weekend.
Friday, Friday.
Getting down on Friday.
.
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This is my english assignment do you think my teacher will approve?
FRIDAY
The world is a large and scary place. So many, Days, Seats, People, There are so many people in it, so many people I will never know, Never knowing, so many things. Now I know. My parents theyve lied to me all this time. My parents enter my room and begin circling me violently as they speak.
You think your whole life is just
FUN FUN FUN FUN
PARTYING PARTYING PARTYING PARTYING
Mum and dad screeched alternating words
Yeah, well it isnt that simple, dammit.
Get in the car. Go. Now! Theres no time to dilly dally. No time for choices. Dad Hollowed
Get in the backseat of the car this very moment or I will tear those hoop earrings out of your precious little ears and feed you the spare cartilage.
Then there will be no more Fun. NO MORE Partying, NO MORE Bowls
No more Cereal and NO MORE...
My parents came to a sudden halt then exited the room? No more? No more what? I thought to myself. What were they taking away from me? What were they hiding from me all these years? What would my friends say? I shouldnt worry I stress to much I mean its FRIDAY I got to get ready for the weekend, WEEKEND!. Harry, Hermione, Dumbledore and Shaniqua screech around the corner towards the bus stop in a convertible, Harry is driving while Shaniqua is riding shotgun, Dumbledore is seated behind Shaniqua and Hermione is in the back next to Dumbledore.
Get in the car Harry sang
But this a bus stop. Youre not a bus.
This is a convertible. You dont even have to open the door. Just get in. Implied Shaniqua
But which seat can I take?
Kicking in the front seat.
Sitting in the back seat. Baby. Harry laughed
They found my notebook all my deepest darkest secrets my, but how? They jumped out of the car it was still running, they all circled around me, Shaniqua stood in front of me holding my Notebook, I was possessed I must speak its contents, I struggled to resist.
Suddenly I began blurting out all the contents.
Another Pleasant Valley Sunday
Study Study Study
Just another Manic Monday
Test Today!
Tuesdays Gone with the Wind!
More homework!
Listen to Wednesdays song!
Music
I am Thursdays child.
You are NOT Thursdays child. Screamed Harry
What comes next? I questioned
The police will be here any minute. Theyre going to see were 12 years old. Theyre going to see the car. Theyre not even going to have to open the doors. Harry Stressed
Its a convertible. yelled Dumbledore
My parents stormed out of the house towards us. The fury in the eyes I knew this wasnt going to end well
Your all under arrest Screamed dad
Goodbye world. Cried Harry
Harry ran towards the car and slid over the hood like the dukes of hazard straight into the drivers seat, smashed the keys in and slammed his foot on the pedal running over Harry, Shaniqua, Dumbledore and Mum and dad. I stood theyre lifeless trying to process something my 12 year old brain couldnt handle, suddenly I look to my left to see a large smiling black man.
How did this happen? said Mr. Black man
He didnt even have his learners permit
I know, I was driven, cruising, fast lanes, switching lanes, I saw it all go down, full speed. Squished. Like Fried Eggs.
Did you say Fried Eggs?
Yes, little girl, I did say Fried Eggs.
Fried Eggs. Fried Eggs. Got to get down on Fried Eggs. I Sang with a smile
Who are you?
I dont know who I am anymore.
Those hoop earrings. That voice.
I have no Voice.
R.B.
Rebecca Black.
The girl who lived.
The girl who lived what did he mean bye lived Im still alive and healthy as ever. At least Im more healthy and alive then these dead people next to me.
The car accident. 11 years ago.
11 years ago? But it feels like it just happened a minute ago.
Well, there was a car accident a minute ago. But there was also one you miraculously survived 11 years ago as a baby. They say that you hit your head. That there was some block in your brain. That theres only one thing you dont have the ability to comprehend. But no one knows what it is. Except your parents. Who are dead now.
Why is this happening to me? Everyone is dead. Its my entire fault. Why couldnt I just choose where to sit? How did they find my notebook? I hate them all
Theyre gone now. Your boy Afro Man is here Hes going to make you a star. I want you to start from the beginning. Tell me what happened.
7am
Yes, thats it
Waking up in the morning. Got to be fresh got togo downstairs.
I knew it.
Everybodys Russian
Tik tok, the time is going on and on.
Cruisin so fast. I want time to fly.
He kept chanting thats its keep on going
Its ItsI dont know what comes next I wasnt sure
FUN! FUN Think about fun... AFRO MAN Screamed
You know what it is! I Sang
He didnt know he really didnt know what it was what was I to do I had to remember these memories I had to, my life would never be the way it used to be until I new I wouldnt give up MR Black man has almost helped my unlock what I thought was forever locked away in my subconscious . What were my parents hiding from me all these years? Who am I!
Youve got to remember something else? Anything? MR Black man panted impatiently
The moon. The moon was so Freaking big. Bigger than my friend. On my right. I wanted to kill that Mutt on my left. I wanted her dead so badly. Her bat mitzvah was so bloody fun. I hated her.
What else, what else?? Keep going!!
We we we so excited. We so excited.
I got this, you got thisnow you know it!
I finally new it I finally retrieved those hidden memories,
If Yesterday it was Thursday, then tomorrow is Saturday, then Sunday comes after wards
Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday, Thursday, Thursday
ITS FRIDAY
Friday. Gotta get down on Friday
Everybodys looking forward to the weekend, weekend.
Friday, Friday.
Getting down on Friday.
.
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Your teacher might think your insane, but this is better than the actual song.
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DJ_Pon3 wrote Your teacher might think your insane, but this is better than the actual song.
for some reason the quotations didn't copy oh well and my name is at the bottom :/
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I Hate Rebbeca Black
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XeX-Menu-Hoster94 wrote I Hate Rebbeca Black
So do i but atleast i got an idea for a short story
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Motto: Godbless Radric Davis and all the McDonalds workers
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Motto: Godbless Radric Davis and all the McDonalds workers
writ ? don't you mean wrote? :trollin:
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zUnbound wrote writ ? don't you mean wrote? :trollin:
How embarrasing and this is supposed to be a english assignment :/
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