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Rate My Creepypasta 1/10 ?
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Hey TTG , I Just Got Finished With A Little Creepypasta , Tell Me How It Is ?
Its A Little Gory For You Queasy Peeps ;)
Creepypasta Name : Lucid Dreams
Ok , So , I Tried Lucid Dreaming For The First Time . I Closed My Eyes , Laid Down With My Arms To My Side And Didnt Move . I Felt This Weight On My Chest , And Then I Heard A Female Voice Whispering . All Of A Sudden , BOOM . I Heard This Scream In My Ears , My Eyes Shot Open , But I Couldn't Move . I Got Pretty Scared At That Point , So I Closed My Eyes , And Started Dreaming Instantly .
It Was Dark , I Couldnt Really See Anything . All The Sudden , I Was In A Theater , Watching A Movie , All By Myself . The Theater Screen Had A Countdown On It , Going Down From 10 .
When It Reached 1 , A Film Started Playing . It Was A Old Film Me And My Friend Made A Long Time Ago , When We Were 13 . It Started Out With My Friend Walking Down A Road , Just Like I Remember It . But It Was Darker , More Gritty Looking , And The Camerawork Wasnt As Amateur As Mine Back Then . He Was Walking Down His Street , Then The Camera Angle Switched To Infront Of Him . He Walked Up To The Camera , Then Stood There , With His Head Down . After About 10 Seconds Of Him Just Standing There , He Looked Up , His Face Hanging Off , And Blood Pouring Out . He Took His Hands Out Of His Pockets , Then Tackled The Camera . The Camera Fell Over , And It Showed A View Of Him Ontop Of Another Kid , Pulling Out A Cleaver , And Slamming The Cleaver Into The Kids Face , Blood Sprayed Everywhere , Then He Looked At The Camera And Whispered The Most Terrifying Phrase Ever .
" Go To Sleep . . "
I Woke Up Instantly After That And Shot Straight Up , Panicking , Sweating Hard .
His Eyes Were The Last Thing I Ever Saw . .
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Its A Little Gory For You Queasy Peeps ;)
Creepypasta Name : Lucid Dreams
Ok , So , I Tried Lucid Dreaming For The First Time . I Closed My Eyes , Laid Down With My Arms To My Side And Didnt Move . I Felt This Weight On My Chest , And Then I Heard A Female Voice Whispering . All Of A Sudden , BOOM . I Heard This Scream In My Ears , My Eyes Shot Open , But I Couldn't Move . I Got Pretty Scared At That Point , So I Closed My Eyes , And Started Dreaming Instantly .
It Was Dark , I Couldnt Really See Anything . All The Sudden , I Was In A Theater , Watching A Movie , All By Myself . The Theater Screen Had A Countdown On It , Going Down From 10 .
When It Reached 1 , A Film Started Playing . It Was A Old Film Me And My Friend Made A Long Time Ago , When We Were 13 . It Started Out With My Friend Walking Down A Road , Just Like I Remember It . But It Was Darker , More Gritty Looking , And The Camerawork Wasnt As Amateur As Mine Back Then . He Was Walking Down His Street , Then The Camera Angle Switched To Infront Of Him . He Walked Up To The Camera , Then Stood There , With His Head Down . After About 10 Seconds Of Him Just Standing There , He Looked Up , His Face Hanging Off , And Blood Pouring Out . He Took His Hands Out Of His Pockets , Then Tackled The Camera . The Camera Fell Over , And It Showed A View Of Him Ontop Of Another Kid , Pulling Out A Cleaver , And Slamming The Cleaver Into The Kids Face , Blood Sprayed Everywhere , Then He Looked At The Camera And Whispered The Most Terrifying Phrase Ever .
" Go To Sleep . . "
I Woke Up Instantly After That And Shot Straight Up , Panicking , Sweating Hard .
His Eyes Were The Last Thing I Ever Saw . .
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I like the use of Coma's
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Dude.. wtf this shit is weird
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7/10 its pretty good
I tried Lucid dreaming but i got scared i heard voices and im never doing it again
I tried Lucid dreaming but i got scared i heard voices and im never doing it again
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NBModz wrote Dude.. wtf this **** is weird
its a creepypasta . its supposed to be weird .
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Y, SO, MANY, COMMAS?
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Prestiqe wrote Y, SO, MANY, COMMAS?
ROFL
Its my way of writing
xD
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What is lucid dreaming?
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Prestiqe wrote Y, SO, MANY, COMMAS?
I, Was, Thinking, The, Same, Thing.
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to be honest i have a VERY short attention span and read the first sentance and was like wtf?
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