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My first Commentary! Feedback please!!!!!
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My first Commentary! Feedback please!!!!!Posted:

Bwah123
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Joined: May 14, 201113Year Member
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hey guys im a new commentator and i would like some feedback of what good and bad about it and a overall view Ill improve especially if i can get some support I would feel very appreciated if you watch it

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