Its good but the objects dont go well together. Try using a retro futurism technique in AI, that makes sweet desktops

i think the bullet hole looks a bit out of place, and the person in the background looks awkward but the text is pretty good

Its ok but truthfully you didn't do that much to it except add a couple of pictures to it but keep practicing you will get better

i dont like the render, he kind of has a white outline around him

who is that random weird looking guy in the background he ruins it

Looks great IMO. I don't like the person but i like the graphics and how it is edited into it . Anychance you could make me a YT channel picture ?

I would remove the bullet hole.


Put clouds on his feet and use motion blur to make it look like he's jumping on clouds.

and I'd remove the gradient and add some stripey purple / light purple lines.


But as [WIP] this is okay keep working on it and it'll get better.

Rating: 7/10

This is really not that good.

You can add a lot more, simple ideas as shoey, schoey or whatever his name just said, but definitely scratch the bullet hole.

Schoey wrote I would remove the bullet hole.


Put clouds on his feet and use motion blur to make it look like he's jumping on clouds.

and I'd remove the gradient and add some stripey purple / light purple lines.


But as [WIP] this is okay keep working on it and it'll get better.

Rating: 7/10

Thanks for the tips, i'll try them out!

Naomi.