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Abstract Design (V2) - By Mosaic (Zephyrus inspiration)
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After seeing Zephyrus's retro abstract design, i decided to have a go at some abstract art. I have never done this style before but still think this turned out pretty nice




please give some feedback so i can improve it



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feedback please

edit: made a v2 which added some levels and add shadow to the shapes to make them 3d




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Saphira (02-22-2012), Zef (02-21-2012)
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I like the other guys better his was alot more simple.

But i like how much more depth you have gone into this.

Also please send me them cube things i cant find a design like that Anywhere without a soldier or something in the middle
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I think theres to many random splatters of the green on the right side. 7/10
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really like the style of the background however i don't think the logo suits the background.

The logo is a modern, futuristic, metallic stele while the background abstract and colourful maybe clipping mask this layer (the logo) on a paint splat in pure white to counter act this?
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CrazyD wrote really like the style of the background however i don't think the logo suits the background.

The logo is a modern, futuristic, metallic stele while the background abstract and colourful maybe clipping mask this layer (the logo) on a paint splat in pure white to counter act this?
thanks for the feedback man, yeah wasnt sure what to put in the middle so just put my logo lol but i will take your feedback on board
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not as good as the origional guys one. You need to outline the shapes to make them 3d. Yours is just 2D
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just added a second version check it out !
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Thanks for the credit, lots of people on this site jack my style or rip my work.

+Rep for honesty!
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Isn't it just the same just bigger...?
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@Mosaic By the way, if you are using splatters don't add a drop shadow to them it ruins the look of the abstract shapes.

PM me or add me on skype and I can help you with abstract stuff.
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