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This is my second go at smudging in Photoshop. I'm curious to know what needs improvement and what I could do to blend the render better to the background. Special thanks to Zephyrus for telling me what needs improvement. I would also like to hear your thoughts about what I could add to the left side to make it less plain.

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Whats new in V2: I fixed someone of the effects and switched up the text font. I lowered the text size and then worked on the blending from the render to the background.

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Whats new in V2.1: I fixed the text and added a star burst effect.

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Whats new in V2.2: Added some fractals to the top left.

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If anyone is willing to help you can contact me through Skype or AIM. PM me for details....


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I am not a good artist so much of what I see is "good" in my opinion.

I like it except for one part. The artist signature. The text is a little bit too big and not really a good text. I know it really doesn't have anything to do with the picture but my only advice is get some better fonts.
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Rhymes wrote
This is my second go at smudging in Photoshop. I'm curious to know what needs improvement and what I could do to blend the render better to the background. Special thanks to Zephyrus for telling me what needs improvement.

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looks sick! 8/10 nice work, maybe do something bigger
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I like but as he said the text doesnt go with it. 8/10 if you can make me one with a Plusil and minun ill rep
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Its alright 7/10!
Keep it up you'll get better
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i actually like this, looks really clean i like the color matches you used
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Clean , and decent , nothing to recommend ! 10/10
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As far as the font goes I'm going to keep it the way it is but just lower the size a bit. I don't want to pick a more noticeable font because I want te focus to be forward the center of the picture. I appreciate everyone's feedback and hope to hear back from you when I release "V2" tomorrow.
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The far left side is pretty dull, the bubble looking things (prob glow renders or something) kind of cut out leaving that area pretty blank, I think either just finding something else to add there or making the entire render area bigger (bubbles and all) would make the piece look better
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x3ternal_HavocX wrote The far left side is pretty dull, the bubble looking things (prob glow renders or something) kind of cut out leaving that area pretty blank, I think either just finding something else to add there or making the entire render area bigger (bubbles and all) would make the piece look better
The thing above his head was the actual render duplicated, sized up, and the opacity lowered. I still can't think of anything to add to the left side though.
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