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Just made my very first commentary, need feedback
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Just made my very first commentary, need feedback Posted:

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Joined: Feb 03, 201113Year Member
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Reputation Power: 6
This is the link to my channel: [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]

[ Register or Signin to view external links. ] that is the commentary.

I need feedback on what I can do better, what was bad and what I can improve for my next commentary.

Cheers mates
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