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-Earl
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hey it's Ari!

ok, our first attempt at a real rap song. aha.

check this out guys!

greatly appreciated, give it a like and subscribe if you like it!

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Not bad, but doesn't sound like your motivated. Its like a constant pitch in which you rap that ruins parts of it. The lyrics are decent but could use some touching up.
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-Earl
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Negate wrote Not bad, but doesn't sound like your motivated. Its like a constant pitch in which you rap that ruins parts of it. The lyrics are decent but could use some touching up.


thanks man, i know it needs some work. we need to get into a real studio.
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