the v looking orange thing in the middle looks like it was just slapped on the whole piece has no depth or light source or flow everything is just mashed together and looks very rushed, take your time on ur pieces trust me it will show if u only take 20min compared to 1hr, take a break for a 1hr or so then look at ur piece again, it will not seem as good to u and u will notice some of the issues like blending, there no blending at all, the text is just slapped on and doesnt fit this sig format at all, try a more calm regular text, the color correction you used or whatever u did made this look really lq, keep it up and dont give up