You need way better lighting, And better render setting Your text would Come out much cleaner, if you added both Gloabal Illumination and Ambient Occlusion. also if your going to use a floor change the the Light's setting to soft shadow, So Everything in the piece looks cleaner, You should also Change the antialiasing to best. You should get into much more than text, So many people use Cinema 4d for just text, when it can be used for so much more, People underestimate the usage of Cinema 4d and toss it's whole purpose aside. Anyways if you ever need help with Cinema 4d work Just hmu with a pm.

Inverse wrote Nice man,

Work on cleaner text.

Thanks man, appreciate it

try using this font

[ Register or Signin to view external links. ] thats the batman font

and make the 3d like even not all slanted other than that i think its a 7.8/10 for your first time

-TNCGfx wrote You need way better lighting, And better render setting Your text would Come out much cleaner, if you added both Gloabal Illumination and Ambient Occlusion. also if your going to use a floor change the the Light's setting to soft shadow, So Everything in the piece looks cleaner, You should also Change the antialiasing to best. You should get into much more than text, So many people use Cinema 4d for just text, when it can be used for so much more, People underestimate the usage of Cinema 4d and toss it's whole purpose aside. Anyways if you ever need help with Cinema 4d work Just hmu with a pm.

Wow thanks, ill definitely ask you if i have any questions. And i did try to apply ambient occlusion, and antialiasing, but it didn't work i guess

VsDesigns wrote try using this font

[ Register or Signin to view external links. ] thats the batman font

and make the 3d like even not all slanted other than that i think its a 7.8/10 for your first time

That font is used to much.. Its not even that great

VsDesigns wrote try using this font

[ Register or Signin to view external links. ] thats the batman font

and make the 3d like even not all slanted other than that i think its a 7.8/10 for your first time

Thats an awesome font, thanks!

TheMenace wrote

VsDesigns wrote try using this font

[ Register or Signin to view external links. ] thats the batman font

and make the 3d like even not all slanted other than that i think its a 7.8/10 for your first time

That font is used to much.. Its not even that great

that font is a good font to use :p im not here to start stuff so please dont dis on the batman forever font... hater -_-

i give that a 7.5/10

Good Job

well never really got into making c4d text and stuff so dont no if this is a template or if u made it from scratch or what, but eye apeal eh the colors dont really match but its decent good job

could use better lighting and some cleaner effects but otherwise not bad for a first time