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Compxsure
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I am still a beginner so dont flame! Tell me what I need to do to improve! Leave feedback!

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Nice work but in my opinion, you really need to loose or change the gun. It looks very fake. Oh, and you haven't cleared off the outline of the man properly.


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looks very cool i like the design of this picture nice job 9/10
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Add a slight black inner glow to the render of the character and lose the gun. After that I'd say 7 out of 10
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Compxsure wrote I am still a beginner so dont flame! Tell me what I need to do to improve! Leave feedback!

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Oh.... My.... This is very awful. The renders are randomly placed, the text isn't even yours, nor the homefront render, the gun is awful and unnecessary, the flames are placed randomly, the text doesn't fit and the BG is boring.

0/10 wouldn't even consider fapping
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