For Your First Episode This Was Realy Good But Thease Are Some Of The Things You Might Want To Improve On

- Speach/ The Things You Are Saying, Try Speeking Abit More Clearly. It Makes a Hole New Diffrence

-Intro/ Go To Flixpress and you can make a good intro there because thats were i get them from +Some Are Free.

-Time/ Try Ceeping The Episodes To About +16min

Things That You Might Want To Try

-Mod Reviews/ You Can Get Alot Of Views By Doing Them, Allso How To Install Them.

-Use More Potions/ Makes The Game Realy Good To Watch And It Cool When Using.

-Map Reviews/ People Love Seeing Map Reviews Because It Gives A Persone A Good Idea Of What They Could Build And What You Have Bulded Also Put A Download Link So People Could Check Out The Map There Selves.

-Texture/ Try Using A TexturePack So It Gives The Game A Diffrent Level Of Experiencing.

-Skin/ I Didnt See Your Skin In The First Episode But Try Pressing F5 And Going Into Third person So You Can Show Of Your Skin.

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