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Rate my first Wallpaper 1/10 <3
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FinaX
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Hey guys,

this is my first wallpaper i made with Cinema4D and Photoshop.
It took about 1-2 hours. Would be awesome if you rate it Smile

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thank you guys
I will do some new stuff in the next days <3
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thanks

hope my next wallpaper will be as good as this
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Dear OP, I don't see how this would take 1-2 hours.

You used a render, C4D Text, and Splashes with a gradient.

My advice: Start using shadows; the splashes do not look good at all, the text could look a little better, and overall it needs just something. I can not think of it.

I'm just giving you criticism to make you better, not for you to become mad over. Hope to see future work from you.
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Thank you 333,

it took so long 'cause i had to learn how to deal with C4D

I will think about your tips and hope that they will improve my next works -

thx
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10/10 i like it
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nice and clean thats an awesome way to start of good job 6.5/10
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