Music: 8/10
Editing: 4/10
Gameplay: 4/10

Lower your bassdrops, motiontrack a bit better and I can see your trying and thats good but you needa learn to use your blending modes to use "Add" when using things like fire and targets to add a more realistic effect look into MBL if you dont have it and if you do get some good CCs from like DualityyEdits, ArteryEdits, DiishonorEdits and just lighten up on the target effects to many :\ but the booms are waay to high

But overall, I can see your trying and thats good enough this is just my opinion ive been editing for years

EdibuhL wrote Music: 8/10
Editing: 4/10
Gameplay: 4/10

Lower your bassdrops, motiontrack a bit better and I can see your trying and thats good but you needa learn to use your blending modes to use "Add" when using things like fire and targets to add a more realistic effect look into MBL if you dont have it and if you do get some good CCs from like DualityyEdits, ArteryEdits, DiishonorEdits and just lighten up on the target effects to many :\ but the booms are waay to high

But overall, I can see your trying and thats good enough this is just my opinion ive been editing for years

Thanks mate, I'll try to remember these things, and I was using MBL. It looks like I used blockbuster for the first clip, and I think love shot for the second and back to block buster again, I'll look those people up.

ForeverAndAlways wrote

EdibuhL wrote Music: 8/10
Editing: 4/10
Gameplay: 4/10

Lower your bassdrops, motiontrack a bit better and I can see your trying and thats good but you needa learn to use your blending modes to use "Add" when using things like fire and targets to add a more realistic effect look into MBL if you dont have it and if you do get some good CCs from like DualityyEdits, ArteryEdits, DiishonorEdits and just lighten up on the target effects to many :\ but the booms are waay to high

But overall, I can see your trying and thats good enough this is just my opinion ive been editing for years

Thanks mate, I'll try to remember these things, and I was using MBL. It looks like I used blockbuster for the first clip, and I think love shot for the second and back to block buster again, I'll look those people up.

you dont have to look them up for their edits I was just letting you know they have some really good Color corrections for you to use

can u make make me a promo

It's alright over all. But in my opinion the flames and the lightning are a bit cheesy and look really fake.

Music: 5/10
Editing: 4/10
Gameplay: 7/10

Music: 10/10
Editing: 3/10
Gameplay: 3/10
Music, you can't go wrong. Unless you're using a really bad Dubstep mix. This song is uncopyrighted and is some form of screamo/heavy/hard rock. With the right editing, it could've looked really nice.

Editing, classic amateur editing style. You're not too bad. Over-CC'd, TONS of overlays, I mean TONS, unnecessary text, bad bass booms. You managed to overuse every cheesy overlay, flames, lock on, etc. Watch a big time edit, like on FaZe's channel. Do you see anything in common? No, you should definitely adapt to cleaner and simpler editing, this was nasty. I could go on, but meh.

Gameplay, well you used pretty bad clips in ugly definition as I call it. This absolutely defeats the purpose of editing. Do not edit anything unless its HD quality 720p @59.94 FPS, you won't get decent results any other way.

The basic fundamentals of editing are not easy to master, I haven't but I'm a good editor. Watching big editor's work really helped me, try it.

itsMichael wrote Music: 10/10
Editing: 3/10
Gameplay: 3/10
Music, you can't go wrong. Unless you're using a really bad Dubstep mix. This song is uncopyrighted and is some form of screamo/heavy/hard rock. With the right editing, it could've looked really nice.

Editing, classic amateur editing style. You're not too bad. Over-CC'd, TONS of overlays, I mean TONS, unnecessary text, bad bass booms. You managed to overuse every cheesy overlay, flames, lock on, etc. Watch a big time edit, like on FaZe's channel. Do you see anything in common? No, you should definitely adapt to cleaner and simpler editing, this was nasty. I could go on, but meh.

Gameplay, well you used pretty bad clips in ugly definition as I call it. This absolutely defeats the purpose of editing. Do not edit anything unless its HD quality 720p @59.94 FPS, you won't get decent results any other way.

The basic fundamentals of editing are not easy to master, I haven't but I'm a good editor. Watching big editor's work really helped me, try it.

Actually, I do see the things i've used in FaZe. Like All the time.. And it is HD, The FPS was Chopped cause my fault.

Music-10/10 (i love metal/hardcore/rock music)
Edit-7/10 (Not bad but just take away some of the stuff in the middle and it would be 10/10)
Gameplay-6/10 (not very good in the begining but started getting really good at end)

I like your work!

Good luck

-Hitman

Sorry if someone considers this gravedigging i just saw this off of her recent forums