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UNDERWORLDHYBRD wrote not really my style but it was good way better than some of these fake ass people like asap rock and juicy j or big sean to me they all are pure ****

A$AP Rocky, Juicy J, and Big Sean are fake? Lmao
And this kid is better than them? Lmao

so i guess your fans of fake ass rappers i listin to real rappers like tech n9ne or eminem people who rap about real problems not about how much money they got or how much weed they smoke cause thats all asap rapes and so does juicy j example bands make her dance or ***** money weed by asap. : this is good music [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]

You're a dumb ass. Damn you'd think that listening to only "real rappers" would make a person smart. Being a fake rapper means they don't do any of the **** they rap about.

An example of that would be this;

I highly doubt a 11 or 12 year ago is riding around killing people. And ASAP Rapes? Is that the best you could do? Don't tell me I'm arguing with a 14 year old.

for one im 20 and i use a wireless keyboard and it sometimes doesnt type wht i want cause i type fast and second that song is **** and so is juicy js as well as asap rocky to me there just more lil wayne and waka clones

My 3 year old cousin could come up with a better name than ASAP ****. ASAP Rocky is nothing like Lil Wayne and Waka, try again.

******** they are alike cause all of them rap like ****

You're dismissed.

and you think you know it all dont you give me example that lil wayne waka are good rappers

Never said they were good.

But didn't I dismiss you?

you dismiss me? wow how old you but whatever cause when it comes down to it your just random over the internet and you mean nothing so bye

I'm a random? Lmao, you're defiantly not 20 years old.

DeadlyDasher wrote

UNDERWORLDHYBRD wrote

DeadlyDasher wrote

UNDERWORLDHYBRD wrote

DeadlyDasher wrote

UNDERWORLDHYBRD wrote

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UNDERWORLDHYBRD wrote

DeadlyDasher wrote

UNDERWORLDHYBRD wrote

DeadlyDasher wrote

UNDERWORLDHYBRD wrote not really my style but it was good way better than some of these fake ass people like asap rock and juicy j or big sean to me they all are pure ****

A$AP Rocky, Juicy J, and Big Sean are fake? Lmao
And this kid is better than them? Lmao

so i guess your fans of fake ass rappers i listin to real rappers like tech n9ne or eminem people who rap about real problems not about how much money they got or how much weed they smoke cause thats all asap rapes and so does juicy j example bands make her dance or ***** money weed by asap. : this is good music [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]

You're a dumb ass. Damn you'd think that listening to only "real rappers" would make a person smart. Being a fake rapper means they don't do any of the **** they rap about.

An example of that would be this;

I highly doubt a 11 or 12 year ago is riding around killing people. And ASAP Rapes? Is that the best you could do? Don't tell me I'm arguing with a 14 year old.

for one im 20 and i use a wireless keyboard and it sometimes doesnt type wht i want cause i type fast and second that song is **** and so is juicy js as well as asap rocky to me there just more lil wayne and waka clones

My 3 year old cousin could come up with a better name than ASAP ****. ASAP Rocky is nothing like Lil Wayne and Waka, try again.

******** they are alike cause all of them rap like ****

You're dismissed.

and you think you know it all dont you give me example that lil wayne waka are good rappers

Never said they were good.

But didn't I dismiss you?

you dismiss me? wow how old you but whatever cause when it comes down to it your just random over the internet and you mean nothing so bye

I'm a random? Lmao, you're defiantly not 20 years old.

yes i am but i dont care if you think im not i said that because you said i dismiss you like your my parents or somthing but i guess your just some guy on the internet who think there the smartest person and they know everything

xDiamond wrote Dr_Zoidberg is right. You need rap a little bit louder. But hey, everybody does start somewhere. Creative name. For some reason, I have faith that you'll get better and don't quit what you love dude.

Thanks Man,

I only do this for fun, so I am over joyed that I'm actually receiving support from some people. I don't even have any real equipment to rap.

WOW, Great work bro. keep going

you need to speed up a bit bro.

RealXBLCharlie wrote WOW, Great work bro. keep going

Thanks Man,

I appreciate all the support I have been given, and all the constructive criticism that only makes me better at what I have fun doing

You have potential.

Keep it up!

Cheers!

txtyl wrote You have potential.

Keep it up!

Cheers!

Thanks Man,

The Next song is for you!! (I'm just kidding), But thank you for the faith in me

Hey Guys Thanks For The Feedback. But if you haven't replied yet it would help enormously if you could write a response with support or some criticism to help me out.

Thanks!!

Kevin

Pretty Good, i liked it. You need to sing louder though.