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2nd Video on PortalsDzn - Check it out and rate
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PortalsDzn
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Heres my second video on my channel, please Like Comment and SUBSCRIBE

and if you dont have youtube give it a rate

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--Portal
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Moz
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My only real issue with this piece is the brush work.
Using the same spatter brush more than once or twice is a bad idea because you get to see the same pattern over and over and again.

Also the last few brushes you added at the top are not needed they kinda spoil the overall effect.

Great choice in music aswell, nice and chilled and didnt feel like someone was trying to pull my eyes out as I watched it.

Good job, just be a bit more random with the brush styles.
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Arf - i like your reply's they help.
I can tell you that hes right about the brushes and this is just me, i liked it better before the last gradient map,thats just how i am but all in all it's wonderfull.
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PortalsDzn
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Arf- wrote My only real issue with this piece is the brush work.
Using the same spatter brush more than once or twice is a bad idea because you get to see the same pattern over and over and again.

Also the last few brushes you added at the top are not needed they kinda spoil the overall effect.

Great choice in music aswell, nice and chilled and didnt feel like someone was trying to pull my eyes out as I watched it.

Good job, just be a bit more random with the brush styles.


Thanks for the reply, your replies really do help! And yeah i get what you mean with the brushes at the end. when i was making it i wasnt too sure on them but i was recording so had a bit of pressure so ended up putting them in. There will be plenty more videos coming out so keep posted
P.s Btw its PixelTV - this is the channel i decided to come up with.
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