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So about a week ago Flumzy gave me a render (the render used in this piece, oh and thanks babycakes) that i knew i could use just didn't know how. Started making a poster with it and came to the decision that i wanted to make a sister piece, two co-existing separate pieces, and this is what i came up with. It is called Hope and Memory, lets see if you guys can understand the deeper meaning behind these pieces. I hope you enjoy, please provide your opinions and feedback as you see fit.
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Feel free to tell me which one you like the best.

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ohhh, nono.

I thought you were going to fix the smoke..?
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Pen-Tool wrote ohhh, nono.

I thought you were going to fix the smoke..?


Explain please? #lrn2postfeedback
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Whoa, i wish i could do amazing work like that :O

Awesome work Zef.

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Zef wrote
Pen-Tool wrote ohhh, nono.

I thought you were going to fix the smoke..?


Explain please? #lrn2postfeedback


We have a sticky for feedback. I know how to post feedback lol.
When you asked for feedback in skype I said you should work on the smoke obviously. Make it like.. smoke, not like balls. I thought you were going to blend the edges and not leave them sharp like that. Blur it up, make it like actual smoke.

Don't get me wrong, this looks really good, and what you did, you pulled it off nicely enough. I think it would look better with, smoke though, not balls.

lol i said balls.
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Pen-Tool wrote
Zef wrote
Pen-Tool wrote ohhh, nono.

I thought you were going to fix the smoke..?


Explain please? #lrn2postfeedback


We have a sticky for feedback. I know how to post feedback lol.
When you asked for feedback in skype I said you should work on the smoke obviously. Make it like.. smoke, not like balls. I thought you were going to blend the edges and not leave them sharp like that. Blur it up, make it like actual smoke.

Don't get me wrong, this looks really good, and what you did, you pulled it off nicely enough. I think it would look better with, smoke though, not balls.

lol i said balls.


Thanks for the feedback bby, tomorrow if I get time I will update with a pen tooled curve in a smoky design. And hey I like balls ;)
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I Would Swap The Mask Out For Something Else, it Just Doesn't Go Together In My Opinion


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I personally like the Memory one. I like the colors better than the Hope one. But really good job. I don't think I will ever get into graphics, even though I would like to.
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Aftxrmath wrote I Would Swap The Mask Out For Something Else, it Just Doesn't Go Together


lol...

What would you have used to improve this piece??

I like the idea of releasing 2 pieces together that are slightly different. Reminds me of when G 'N R released 2 similar albums simultaneously.

Cool pieces, very Zeffy lol.
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I find hope better, the yellow in the sky contrasts the other colors quite well, and the sky almost looks like it highlights the hood of the render. Great job on both of them.
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