Looks nice, honestly I like original stuff. 9/10

Enriched wrote Looks nice, honestly I like original stuff. 9/10

thanks for the feed back im trying to improve

My favourite one if the very first one with the Halo person looks really good mate.
Over I would give 8/10.

Ooo, James Neal.. Not my favorite player but definitely some nice work you did. I would suggested to play with the Contrast/Brightness levels a little more on [ Register or Signin to view external links. ] . The First one is a little to bright and the second is a little dull. But over all I would give 8/10 on all of your work! Nice job man!

-Emberzz wrote My favourite one if the very first one with the Halo person looks really good mate.
Over I would give 8/10.

thanks for the feed back

Twister wrote Ooo, James Neal.. Not my favorite player but definitely some nice work you did. I would suggested to play with the Contrast/Brightness levels a little more on [ Register or Signin to view external links. ] . The First one is a little to bright and the second is a little dull. But over all I would give 8/10 on all of your work! Nice job man!

thanks for the feed back man really apprecaite it

nine out of ten bro
nice work ;)

Iyaz wrote nine out of ten bro
nice work ;)

thanks for the feed back man

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Its oversaturated and yellow and blue doesnt really fit that well! take some colors like:
green and red, red and blue, blue and pink, purple and pink
And the text is alot too basic, you should increase the text! DONT put strokes around your renders or your texts because its really looking horrible! thrust me! The middle guy, is too WHITE! and it need to have a better CC! so it could, (fit better and be enjoyable to watch as a spectator)
Passing to your other work!
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I have nothing too say, its a enjoyable peace too watch, a bit too dark! but its mainly a good project because, Your text fill well! and it blend very well togheter!
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in this one, DONT PUT DROPSHADOWS or STROKES on render (skull and guy) because its making it not fit, the guy isnt in the image and wat are you trying to do, is blend the guy in the image so, add a bit of smudge around edges (ABIT!) This is very tricky, (smudge is hard m8!)
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The halo character is alot too dark and the halo character as white outline thats looks horrible! too fix that: Add a strokes -1 according too the color of your scene or you re pentool it.