JoshhUK- wrote I think that looks really good mate, but it is a bit too square where the screen is, but good try mate you've done well

Thanks!

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That subtle change of the edges really did help. Now I recommend just working with the typography to really help the overall presentation of the piece.

Looks very good an clean, just 2 things:
1. Make sure you have a light source of some sort so there is a small but noticeable shadow being cast from the phone, when i put my iPhone down i always notice it.
2. There is a little too much black space between the actual screen of the phone and the boundaries, cut that down a bit and make it look a little sharper.
Once you do those things it should be looking even better than it does now.
8.5/10