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Everyone please check out my new song and give me feedback
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It's good, just try to write your music to match your beat. Also, make your vocals slightly quieter so that they don't overpower the sound of the beat. Overall great though.
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-Dog wrote It's good, just try to write your music to match your beat. Also, make your vocals slightly quieter so that they don't overpower the sound of the beat. Overall great though.


thanks for the feedback
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Little of beat and a little loud. Do both of those and you'll have a better product.
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Any more feedback i can get???
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I hate it no offense. But good effort!
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The_Shuffler wrote I hate it no offense. But good effort!


Its just not your style of music i guess lol none takin
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Any more feedback people???
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Piranhaconda wrote


The introduction is way too long, be a little more relaxed when you 'spit' your lyrics and you could add a little more bass to the beat. Now the only problem for me is I don't like your style of lyrics, I like songs with lyrics that I can connect with or that involve nice word play.
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i think it would sound a little better if you pust omse more emotion behind your voice its sounds to me like your trying to read what is written fast and get through it
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